i am from boston.....pliz give me feed back abt this  song....                thanx for listening

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very nice song dude..keep it up !

The Nepali part is good, nice melody. The black accent is forced and sounds really fake. I think most people would agree that your song would be golden if you left that out.

u bas*** ... filthy little crap ... rap hanna aaudaina bhane dohori gauna start gar ... suits u better ....  what's the f***n problem with u guys staying the states? .... is the BUSH that's hanging underneath that's bothering u all? ,,,,, c we've got lots of shavers these days ... electrical, automatic, n manuals as well .... so shave that thick AFRO-AMERICAN BUSH that's troubling you .... what is it with the imitation of western culture? ... and the copy cat as well .... do something which gives u a better exposure .... is your god damn father a nigg**? .... u 've got that black genes in you, huh? .... gadha le track suit layo bhandai ma zebra hudaina ni ..... so u smart *ss, better get this and get this straight into your distorted, trash full brain, that life ain't abt doing raps ..... know your limitations ... MF ... if i ever see you post something of this sort anymore, i swear on your black father, i'll cut your ba**s off and hang them around your ears ... reminds me of a new headphone ...... and if u learn from this, i will know that the burden on earth is reduced to some amount ... and if u don't get this at all, u know wad, u are a fu*** mo*on and after u die, yamaraj will rap for you with his sano bhai hanging in your mouth ... u got me .. rite .... i hope u do ... u don't, u are a fagg** ... nagarpalika ko phor ho ta .... kan ko kaneguji ... gu ko laddu ..... laddu khadai bas .. peda ko dhak na de hai .... bhandai chhu ... batda chhai hune hoina ... pheri khalas ..... ja tero pizza delievery garne time bhayo hola .... chak thapdai bas ... tero kale counterparts haven't had good s*x for quite a while now ... they  must be hungry and starving ... satisfy their needs .... do the dishes and rap ... u Su** ... haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ..uhhhhhhhuhuuuuuuuuuu ... hehhehehehehheheheh .....hurhururhurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ......

Well again, in mediation, I see your point RED and your views are the same in spirit as mine (except for the use of explicit words). Yes I am sick and tired of Nepali rap star wannabes. Somebody quite wisely said "Don't copy if you can't imitate," and actually when I heard the intro "rap" I was wondering if this song was meant to be a parody of some kind. Then the Nepali part kicked in  which was actually quite the opposite, the voice was polished and the melody was also catchy. But then again when "rap" suddenly interrupted the song, the whole creation was reduced to a farce,  in essence no different than some cheap ass Mithun dance song.

Please stop using "rap" in your Nepali songs if you can't do it properly. Its really sickening. If you can genuinely pull it off, then yes, otherwise do yourself a favor and don't even bother.
Regards.

nice try... need more practice man.... nepali part is good.... keep it up

1. voice is real good.

2. from today, never RAP again.

3. find a better lyricist, do not go with the usual phukkin lines

4. again, NEVER RAP again.